【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 P6 B: O8 }1 b& l: A  tFrom the first moment we met,
3 L6 ^# d  M; k. ]1 @1 E2 `I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 V$ I' r" f$ m% C1 u4 X9 e6 pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 W! u) Z) Q8 PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# f9 J6 \$ q0 N2 @( X4 kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 v% F: {" E. E$ hCan I entrust it to you?
  ^* y- b" l  i9 aEntrust my love within your heart
( J' D  j+ V7 DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 }  l9 n% ]' q& [I want to confess that I love you,
1 B6 r( M# ^/ ^4 }# a( u) ]; k3 GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ A& n. J' x$ w- V( }7 aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 @4 ~$ y) p  q) RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 W- o  `! t. \6 DEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
( w1 N" @' \% ]5 cEntrust my love within your heart
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& @/ j2 H! V+ n! C1 [- u. f9 f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 d5 J, k' \# \3 u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 [/ k! E& T% S! ^' n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& a: e6 z+ z" x/ g5 v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 H- \9 U2 ?: t6 o/ d$ D5 J# u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' ]! O* ]3 [: A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 o5 A8 V( r7 E5 U: d<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 m8 {  o( |& F' Y; p9 P% ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 W" ~* q' p! j4 j8 Y2 m& l% g1 P<P>但我不会</P>
* j9 ^4 X# [# K0 V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# D5 i6 v8 M+ [' v. s7 s; i9 b5 _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 d/ x" m0 S; p: R: Y4 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# D( n" K6 d: X$ J; y8 S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& y( @' n  j8 g+ G' p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 D: k, E+ {% _* u% z( c7 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 I: T- A/ m6 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% v$ R. m/ ]6 k+ |+ i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' f! C3 n! _. A+ {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. ]7 r; [& j3 h; t) V6 P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; n% C7 @- |1 l, s' ~- T9 J3 g8 {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. |3 z. S, o! ?6 x- X; l<P>But I never did </P>
3 }- K" V6 Y( y. i6 B: M! c) |<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& \0 ~! S! U8 j) e% _; b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 W- v# u8 a% {& N9 K6 C- R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  {9 T5 s/ }2 s, s! P& C% t/ M( b$ `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 O# U3 f: `4 f2 H  |/ J2 H: I* i  t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- Y: e2 }2 A+ Q" A& {! Q( v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) p; @% E) Z' W- {( h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; J) l" J9 a, m- [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, r' \' \, u7 N2 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ y: \8 v' p4 z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: D% C( R: z( f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 L- M* }( Q2 l7 }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' L: W( n- j  T$ K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 a+ S+ p( T- P3 v8 q  N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>